Monday, November 8, 2010

Script #1 ICAF sc5

Scene 5

This scene begins with Daniel and Nina lying on the ground after the accident. Blood is everywhere and they are covered with newspaper. Mom and two policemen approach the scene. Nina’s schoolmates tag along. They all look very sad. Mom had to be hold by Nina’s friends.

Police 1 : I am so sorry ma’am. You would have to have a look at the body to identify whether the victim is your daughter.

(policemen 2 brings mom forward and pulls up the newspaper)

Mom : Oh my God Nina!!!! My baby Nina. What happened to you?? What have you done? Nina..How could you leave me alone?? Nina my baby…

(all her friends cried as well. Suddenly Nina stands up..slowly..Blood is coming down her forehead)

Nina : Mommy…Mommy…Why are you crying mommy? Don’t cry. Look..I am ok. I am fine. Mommy…Mommy…Please don’t cry. I am seriously fine.

(the two policemen slowly bring mom up on her feet. They slowly leave the scene)

Nina : Mommy..Where are you going? Mommy don’t leave me here. Don’t leave me here alone. Daniel…wake up. Daniel..Daniel!! Mommy..help me mommy. Don’t leave me here. I am scared. I am sorry mommy. I should’ve have said sorry to you mommy. I should have said sorry…

(background music of wind and slowly it fades away)

The End.

9 comments:

Nazrin Saad said...

bila mula baca ayat 1st part ni, i was thinking.

oh, mungkin boleh wat nina tu dah mati dan dia jadi spirit tgk flashback semua tu. ala2 christmas carol tp utk masa silam ja.

bila dah habis baca, i was saying,

demm.

ismeth said...

aphal dem ??

Anonymous said...

idea cite ni ok gak la...
tp jalan cite...aaa...
gua xpndai nk komen...

boleh diubah jalan cite
biar jd lebih tragis ke...

say- O said...

biar semua mati sebab usa bom kl, mahu x?wahahhaha!!!!

Anonymous said...

bole tak bagi sinopsis? sebagai org bekerjaya. wa kurang masa nak baca. huhu. takle xpe.

Anonymous said...

TAKNAK MATI DAH. 10kali tgk dato onn perform. 10kali pasal mati. boring~

wann afzan™ said...

ahahahhaa..tp ni mati lain skit ahhhh

~**Raw Honey**~ said...

2 org bawa satu watak?satu jd mayat satu yg real.hehe.

xsuke cara dia mati,x cantik.mksd saya..mati dgn cara common sgt..saya suka klu english theater perform in a "beautiful way"~mcm cerita love suicide sy rase watak heroinnye mati dgn "cantik" juga..wahahaha..killed by her loved one,how beautiful ~~ >.<)

ismeth said...

klau x nk wt mati kn..pe kate wt crite ni mcm 1 flashback..mybe wtak pompuan tu da bape taun koma..pstu pndai2 fkir la..wt mcm kite wt drama bi taun lpas..yg *aku sore pelan*...tetibe trfkir psl bnde ni time kt toilet.